Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Lily Writes About Getting Ready For Pets Day

Lily has just turned 6. 
She was excited to enter her rock Mouse Family as an exhibit on Pets Day last week.


Do you have any feedback for Lily about her writing and her mouse family?

8 comments:

  1. Dear Lily
    We made cookies at home. 2nd I made my bike. 3rd I cleaned out the cat kennel.

    by Caitlin

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  2. Dear Lily
    I have a pet rook but I gave it to matthew. I suid to gave It back but he den’t gave it back too me. I cried and told mum !

    by Marcus

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  3. Dear Lily
    I think your writing is really good. I made a pet rock. It is very cool and I made some biscuits.. I came 4th in the biscuits and I got a ribbon. Hooray. I like pets day because I like pets.

    from Ricci

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  4. Dear Lily,
    A beautiful story. So glad you enjoyed pet's day.
    The mouse family is still sitting on the windowsill in the kitchen.

    Love Dad, Mum, Hazel & Beth

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  5. Dear Lily
    I love pet rock because I yos to have a pet Rock but Its broken.

    by marcus

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  6. Dear Lily,
    I think you explained very carefully and clearly about how you came by your pet rock mouse family - I really enjoyed reading your work and looking at the photo of your pets -well done! May I ask you what a 'vivid' is - in the UK, vivid means brightly coloured, or standing out. It's an adjective, not a noun. I wonder if it means something else in New Zealand?
    Mrs Monaghan
    UK

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  7. Dear Lily
    I have a pet rock her name is emily. After I made a pet rock I done backing they were spider cup cakes. I got a ribbon. Pets day is fun! I also done some art it was under sea I drawed some fish because there are fish under the sea and sea weed because there is sea weed at the bottom of the sea. there is also sea wee under rivers I like your mouse family.

    from jamie

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  8. I RACED OUT OF BED AND GOT READY FOR SCHOOL. NEXT I GOT READY FOR PET DAY. THEN I GOT RAEDY FOR TUESDAY.I LOVE PET DAY. ITS AWESOM. I LIKE THE BIKES AND DOGS.I HAVE A CAT.FROM CAITLIN

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