Recently the children in Mr Salsich's class and
the children in Miss McGeady's class have been learning to show how a character feels by using descriptive words.
We enjoyed reading the descriptions so
this week we had a go too.
Did you spot some descriptive similies?
Can you visualise how each person
was feeling?
w♦ made some pe♥ple funny.
ReplyDeleteI like it wh♥n I hear the p♔ges turn.:);)
ReplyDeleteDear B4,
ReplyDeleteYou have done an excellent job using details to describe feelings! I could really picture how the different people were feeling.
Some of the great similes I noticed were: I jumped around like a kangaroo, I was crying like a thunderstorm, I was shouting like a gorilla, I ran like a cheetah, and I felt jollier than a dancing hippo.
What wonderful descriptions - and I enjoyed flipping the pages of your "book."
From,
Mr. Salsich
Dear B4,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing! You all did such a fantastic job of describing each feeling.
I am going to show your book to my students. Maybe they will want to write about feelings too.
Keep up the great writing,
Mrs. W
Did you no how I was feeling?
ReplyDeleteDear Emily
ReplyDeleteYou wrote that tears were rolling down your cheeks, so when I visualised that, it made me think that you were sad. Am I right?
from Mrs M♔K
Dear Mr Salsich and Mrs Watson
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading our writing. We had a lot of fun with it. It is always nice to have an authentic audience.
from Mrs M♔Kenzie
Dear Mrs McKenzie you are right I was sad
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