Friday, June 11, 2010

Character and Setting Descriptions






This week we worked on developing character and setting descriptions.
We want the reader to be able to make a picture in their minds as they read our writing.
Here are pieces of writing by Geneva, Nikaya, Tessa, Luka and Thor.
Double click the picture to read the text.
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  1. JiajiaJune 11, 2010 at 8:37 PM

    I like the drawing and writings. Thay look nice.

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  2. GenevaJune 12, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    I really like Nikaya's pitcher because Ilike how he put the ice cream truck on the beach and Iliked everyone eleses to.I liked mine as well.I saw Jennas when it was on the chair and I liked it.I think our class did so well.

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  3. myahJune 12, 2010 at 5:21 PM

    I like nikaya's picher because that I like his car. I like it.

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  4. nikaya homeJune 12, 2010 at 6:28 PM

    thanks geneva,myah and jiajia for you kins.

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  5. amberJune 17, 2010 at 11:31 AM

    Hi Thor I like your pitcher because you uesd some discibnig words that I relly love.from amber.

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  6. mihiJune 20, 2010 at 2:02 PM

    i like luka's one good job luka form mihi

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  7. braydenJune 21, 2010 at 2:01 PM

    i like your old man thor

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  8. New Town 2nd GradeFebruary 20, 2013 at 3:49 PM

    Great descriptions B4! We are writing realistic fiction stories at the moment and focusing on the character and setting too. I look forward to sharing your writing with the Kapai Kiwis tomorrow during our Writers Workshop!

    From Miss Lologa
    New Town Kapai Kiwis

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