This term we have been working on collaborative writing with our buddies
We used the Storybird site and have worked in
pairs or threes to create our stories.
There were lots of things we had to think about to collaborate successfully.
We learned to re-read the story each time it came back, so that our next page
would fit in.
We had to choose pictures that went with the story, and our story had to make sense.
Our stories have been embedded on our wiki pages.
Please click on the links to read our stories.
We hope you enjoy them.
pairs or threes to create our stories.
There were lots of things we had to think about to collaborate successfully.
We learned to re-read the story each time it came back, so that our next page
would fit in.
We had to choose pictures that went with the story, and our story had to make sense.
Our stories have been embedded on our wiki pages.
Please click on the links to read our stories.
We hope you enjoy them.
Thank you Mrs Watson's class.
We really enjoyed writing with our fabulous buddies and we love our stories!
What did YOU enjoy most about writing the Storybirds together?
Dear Awesome posters,
ReplyDeleteWow. amazing titles! You guys are so good at making story birds. Could you tell Jonathan that I am wodering how he thought up such a good title? Thanks.
Your friend, Oceana
Dear B4,
ReplyDeleteI wish we could do our story bird again! because, it is fun to make a story, choose a picture, and talk about it.
From,
Ganda
Dear b4
ReplyDeleteWow the storybird's went good and look's cool too,
from nikki
Dear b4
ReplyDeleteWow Ganda 's storybird look's cool I woder how she done it?
Dear B4 and Mrs. Watson's Class,
ReplyDeleteWow! Intercontinental collaboration on writing! You are techie rock stars, for sure.
I enjoyed reading your stories, especially the spooky ones. I always love to be scared! I thought the fairy story had especially beautiful graphics.
Next year, I am going to use Storybird with my third graders. Thank you for sharing such a cool Web 2.0 tool, as well as the idea of using a Wiki to collaborate.
Mrs. Kistler
A Summer Breakin' 49'er
Dear B4,
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Eb I am in 2KM and 2KJ at Leopold Primary School. We have been writing our own stories in my class. I love making up stories,writing about them and drawing pictures. I also love reading them to my little brother.
Your Pal,
Eb
Dear EB
ReplyDeleteThe earthqake has apinrd in christchuch.
thak you for your comment
fome kayden
Dear Mrs Kistler
ReplyDeleteWe like your blog. At home my mum maked me do my own story bird. Which part of the word do you live in?
your friend Tyla
dear oceana
ReplyDeletei have thieking about the sentence all day long. we hope we skype.
from Jonathon
Dear B4
ReplyDeleteI love your story birds. I have done some as well.
From Paul
Dear B4,
ReplyDeleteYour Storybirds are really cool!
My class has also done Storybird.
Well Done!
Keep up the great work!
Natalie :lol:
Dear Open the door to B4
ReplyDeleteThose Story Birds sound great.We're using Story Bird too:)
from Azzudien:)
Dear b4
ReplyDeleteI think b4 know a lot of the food
best wishes Lukah
Dear Oceana
ReplyDeleteWhy didn'tt you write a comment back to me? We hope we skype with you .
warm wishes Jonathon .
In the weekend I went to the river and I went down the rapids, but I got stopped by a big log and then I got out.
ReplyDeleteby Spike
Dear B4
ReplyDeleteOur grade has done StoryBird too!
They look amazing!
Keep it up,
♥ Tia and 3/4G
:D
Dear B4,
ReplyDeleteWhat great Story Birds!:roll:
My class also did Story Birds!
I couldn't pick a favorite story.
Keep up the great work!
Tayla
:roll:
Dear Tayla
ReplyDeleteWe like your blog.
When did you do
your story bird
and where do you
live
your friend Tyl♥
I
ReplyDeleteDear B4
I think that all our storybirds are cool. Do you know how many storybirds we have?
from Liam
by Liam
Dear b4
ReplyDeleteOur story bird is cool. I wish we could do it again. My story bird is called 'Ganda and Silkence Super hero.'
from Ganda.
Your story birds were awesome!!!!!
ReplyDeleteDear Liam
ReplyDeletethere are 16 story birds.
G:)nda